A Day In The Life of CJ Carver

Being an author, people think I get up around midday, go for a long lunch and return home to bang out a few pages before pouring myself a glass of wine and finishing for the day.

Hmmm.  Nice thought.  If only it didn’t take me quite so long to bang out those pages . . .

A Day In The Life of CJ CarverToday I’m woken by the bin men at seven-thirty.  Eyes closed, I’m lying in bed listening to them crashing and banging down the road when, seemingly out of nowhere, an idea begins to form about the next book.  I let it drift.  I don’t try and pin it down.  Gradually it takes a firmer shape and I study it carefully before letting it drift again.

It is this state between waking and sleeping that I find the most valuable for creative thought.  It’s almost like meditation, but not quite, because instead of being clear of thought my mind is occupied with the story I’m trying to tell.  By the time I’m fully awake, I’ve made a handful of notes and am ready to leap into the day.

After a shower, breakfast and a brisk walk, I get stuck in to emails, wanting to clear my mental desk before I start writing.  I’m working on the sequel to Spare Me The Truth, or at least I was until my postie arrives and hands me three parcels, each containing a brand-spanking new hardcover book.  They all look fantastic and although I know I have to read them – I’m on several panels at CrimeFest in Bristol this year with the authors – I really shouldn’t start now.  Or should I?  I flick one open and am immediately captivated by the first page.  This sort of temptation is ever present being self-employed, and I have to force the books away and out of sight.

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Credit: Steve Ayres

Soon, I’m completely absorbed in my work and don’t notice the time passing until my email pings.  It’s from a psychologist who is helping me research the psychopathology behind serial killers.  Another arrives, this one from a detective inspector in Manchester.  I know it drives the police crazy when writers get things wrong, so I do my utmost to get my facts right, but I have to be careful with research as it can be so riveting, I never get any writing done.

I work on my manuscript until early evening when I have a quick look at Twitter (another terrible distraction) before deciding whether it’s cold enough to light the wood burner.  Or shall I go to the pub?  Writing is a solitary occupation and aside from the postie, I haven’t spoken to anyone all day.  I’d better go to the pub, I decide, and talk to someone or I might go quite mad.

 

©CJ Carver 2016

 

 

Submissions Now Open For The 9th Luke Bitmead Writer’s Bursary

writing competitions, writing, competitions, novel, novel writingWe know a lot of writers read Frost so we wanted to bring this great competition to your attention. Submissions for the 2016 Luke Bitmead Writer’s Bursary are now open.

The award was set up shortly after Luke’s death in 2006 by his family to support and encourage the work of fledgling novel writers and the Bursary is now the UK’s biggest award for unpublished authors. The top prize is a publishing contract with Legend Press and a £2,500 cash prize.

Luke Bitmead was the first novelist to be published by Legend Press, his novel White Summer was released in 2006 shortly before his death. Two novels have been published posthumously – The Body is a Temple and Heading South (co-authored by Catherine Richards). Information about Luke can be found at www.lukebitmead.com.
This fantastic bursary for a ninth year, and hope to continue the success of our previous winners Andrew Blackman (On the Holloway Road), Ruth Dugdall (The Woman Before Me), Sophie Duffy (The Generation Game), J.R. Crook (Sleeping Patterns,) Joanne Graham (Lacey’s House), Jo Gatford (White Lies), Tara Guha (Untouchable Things) and Lyn G. Farrell (The Wacky Man) published today 2nd May 2016.

Only adult fiction is eligible for this bursary, no children’s books or non-fiction.

Tom Chalmers, Legend Press MD comments ‘We are delighted to be continuing this brilliant bursary for the ninth year. The prize is a fantastic way to find new, undiscovered writing talent, and we have found some of our most exciting authors through the prize. Luke was an amazingly talented young author, and it is an honour to be continuing the prize in his name.’

Submissions from writers will be accepted from Monday 2nd May until Friday 15th July 2016.

For information about how to enter visit: http://www.legendtimesgroup.co.uk/legend-press/365-luke-bitmead-bursary

 

 

Surreal? Probably, but it’s my life Alex Bannard – Bangkok correspondent

Being an expat affords some amazing experiences, luxuries and some frustrations. In a previous expat life I had friends who described it as ‘not real life’ – it is real, it’s our life right now, surreal though it might sometimes be. 

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Take a typical moment in time in Bangkok.  I was invited to join a friend in her first ante-natal appointment for her fourth pregnancy. Hubby felt his role was done so it was my privilege to share a wonderful moment with her and to have some fun too. Afterwards we were waiting outside for a taxi to go to lunch. I say waiting, we actually got proactive and went straight to the area where they are dropping off to pick one up.

 

‘We were met with, ‘No madam you go get number, please’.

 

There’s a system. Wow. 

 

We went to the taxi desk & got number 49. There are many people milling around and obviously we don’t expect to get in the first taxi. Several minutes later a lady with number 52 clutched in her palm was clearly edging to the front of the ‘queue’…there is no queue just a mass of people. 

 

I don’t really like pointless rules but if there is a system, queue or not – you wait your turn lady or I will take you down. I’m British after all, and we invented the queue.

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Realizing we probably needed to register with Clipboard-lady I told her our destination & she wrote it next to 49. We’re back in the game. Number 52 can wait in line. 

 

After many more minutes it became apparent that the system is not a system. 

 

Clipboard-lady approached the next available taxi and gave him a range of options on which location he wanted next, which often he declined & drove off. Oh for goodness sake -it’s 37 degrees humid as a Chinese Laundry we’ve be waiting for almost 1/2 hour, my friend is in wedges and I am watching my long awaited Dean & Delucalunch disappear up the ‘system’.

 

So I took things into my own hands & walked down the line and asked a taxi way back in the taxi queue if he will take us to Emporium. ‘Madam, number?’ he said. 

 

I replied, ‘We have a number but there is seriously no system. Taxi just choose where he wants to go. You want to go to Emporium?’ 

 

‘Ok but 100bht’

 

‘Done.’ We jumped in with our laminated 49 (stick that in your ‘system’) and drive off. 

 

The traffic is horrible. We pass a Dean & Deluca and get stuck in a nose to tail traffic, so I hand him his 100bht & say ‘Kap kun ka we get out here.’ 

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‘No madam. Just round corner.’ He replies.

 

‘Oh ok’

 

Finally we pull up at…Central Embassy. Not quite where we wanted to be.

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Yep, surreal it is. But we love it. 

😳

 

 

The life of a Second Wife by Margaret Graham

Frost is so pleased to see Elizabeth Buchan’s novel, The Second Wife picked out by Daisy Goodwin in her feature in the Daily Mail: Second Marriages – key novels to help you through the trickier times in life.

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Daisy Goodwin discusses Rebecca by Daphne Du Maurier, Before She Met Me by John Barnes, and Sunday Times No 1 bestselling author, and patron of Words for the Wounded, Elizabeth Buchan, and her novel The Second Wife.

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The Second Wife explores the world of the mistress who becomes the wife – overtones of Sir James Goldsmith who did just that, and thereby created a vacancy. Ouch.
According to Buchan the second marriage is a world that can be less than appealing, full of pitfalls and  of course,  baggage. Elizabeth Buchan, who spoke recently at the Words for the Wounded LitFest at Downley, High Wycombe, (Frost’s editor, Catherine Balavage spoke later in the day) examines Minty’s experiences of a second marriage sympathetically, but with her usual incisive wit and elegance. It is a compelling and heart-warming novel, as are her others,  the most recent being the thought provoking and excellent I Can’t Begin to Tell You set in Denmark during the 2nd World War.

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It’s great to see The Second Wife having another outing. Go on, give yourself a treat – it is very well worth reading.

Elizabeth Buchan’s latest book The New Mrs Clifton will be out in August 1016. Frost is looking forward to reviewing it.

 

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The Second Wife                   published by Penguin
I Can’t Begin to Tell you        published by Penguin
The New Mrs Clifton             published by Penguin  August 2016

 

Surrealism, Me And Rene Magritte By Wendy Breckon

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Picture the scene. Beaming toddler leaps down the path clutching a painting. Circles, squiggles, and wavy lines in bright zany colours. Mum or Dad sweep up the impressive piece of artwork, pinning it on to the fridge for all to admire. Could this be the start of a burgeoning art career, the beginnings of a future Monet or Picasso? In the same way, when a little child kicks a ball around with some nifty footwork in the park, the idea of a famous footballer such as Lionel Messi in the family remains a fascinating thought. The answer is you won’t know yet, but there’s always a possibility.

I loved art and wielding a paint brush from an early age. Once, there was a zealous moment at the age of four, when our black farm cat burst out in oversized orange spots. Well… er… with some help from me as I pursued him round the garden.

Our secondary school in Ireland was hot on literature and culture. Yippee! Sandwiched between the intricacies of science and the sheer terror of Maths, was the History of Art with a superb teacher. I soaked it all up. Lowry, Matisse and Constable, with their fascinating lives and influences.

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Rene Magritte has always been one of my favourite artists. Born in 1898, he lived most of his life in Belgium. He shunned the intellectual and artistic life of the capital, preferring to live with an unassuming identity. For him, the art of painting was a means of knowing life better and at the same time, liberating things from their familiar roles in everyday life. We are used to the images of birds in cages or apples on trees. Our interest is awakened more readily if the bird is replaced by a fish or a shoe. As a surrealist painter, Magritte had the knack of showing both the absurdity and contradiction in reality.

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He has been described as a, ‘painterly Lewis Carroll’, who created a wonderland for children in his book, Alice in Wonderland, with the tales of the Queen of Hearts, the Mad Hatter and the White Rabbit. Maybe this is why I remain fascinated by Magritte, as this story was my favourite as a child. I spent a lot of time turning the pages and imagining I was Alice.

To look at a Magritte painting is to see through the barrier of time. His vision of the world, was one in which the people and things around him, could quite easily turn into something else. Bowler hatted commuters hung in the clear skies like April showers and express trains rushed out of open fire places.

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The ultimate experience for an art lover, was a visit to the Rene Magritte Museum three years ago with my son. This building on the Place Royale, in a neoclassical hotel, houses a collection of original sculptures and drawings, in addition to the two hundred paintings. As I hovered in front of the artist, who I’d admired so much as a teenager, I was able to appreciate for the first time all his wonderful work, in the moody, half lit interior… the perfect setting. I will never own one of Magritte’s paintings, but the close proximity to this master of fantastic art was an experience to remember.

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Greta Stoddart and White Space by Maya Pieris

Greta Stoddart makes very good chocolate biscuits. She is also an award-winning poet, been a performer, teaches creative writing and lives with her family, including Juno the “liquorice allsorts” dog, in Devon, down a steep track with a huge view across the Axe Valley.

Greta  Stoddart and White Space   by Maya Pieris2Over tea and biscuits we talked about words and silence, 2 big elements in her creative life. Words, she said, were an early love, her first “self-published” poetry anthology written aged 9 and illustrated by her sister but not she said like Jane Austen or the Brontes.

 

The collection, which included  “Master Crash It All” about a particularly clumsy boy,   “ was a bit tumpty, tumpty” – her description – but lines would arrive in her head as she awoke and wanted to be written down. The book happened just before a major riding accident which saw her spend 3 months in hospital and then several more on the sofa reading or looking out the window, in retrospect an excellent nursery for a fledgling poet who turned from a “an outgoing child into a more reflective one”.

 

Her road to physical recovery turned out, however, to be through ballet, almost on doctor’s orders, this leading to the other passion-dance and then theatre. Eventually after reading drama at Manchester Greta went to study with the Jacques Lecoq school of physical theatre in Paris specialising in clown skills. 2 years on found her and 2 female friends  touring  Europe with Brouhaha, their mime theatre company, which lasted for 5 busy years.

 

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She says the experience “taught me to respect silence- which poetry also values in the white space around the text”, a “pressured silence, to not speak unless you really need to”. Space in both words and performance is certainly central to her writing and her teaching- her workshops are always measured, calm situations where listening is of the essence. It was while on tour in Belfast that the writing bug began to go viral in the form of “lines in my head” which insisted on being written down, as in childhood.

 

She took a year out of acting and never went back. Her timing was stage perfect- she booked onto an Arvon writing course led by Simon Armitage in the company of other then aspiring poets such as Kate Clanchy and moved on to be tutored by Michael Donaghy. She took to poetry like a duck to water and found an audience in sympathy with her work resulting in her first collection, At Home in the Dark, which received the 2001 Geoffrey Faber Memorial Prize. She claims  “it was a bit of luck” but was actually the result of 7 years work.

Greta  Stoddart and White Space   by Maya Pieris3She has since written 2 further collections appearing in a fairy tale way around every 7 years. Her latest, Alive, Alive O, published last year deals with death, a subject which has interested her since childhood and which came about after a series of personal bereavements. It is, however, not a depressing collection- sad, thoughtful, painful and also positive as she attempts to cover the complexities of this subject.

 

So with 3 books completed she is in quiet contemplation of her next writing challenge so we await with interest What Greta Did Next.

 

Books available at all independent and chain book stores.

 

 

Writing Short Stories for Magazines

Short Story Magazines

The Most Important Thing You Need to Know

 

There isn’t a secret recipe to success so it’s no use looking for the answer here.  If you want to write short stories and sell them there is one thing you need to do before you even begin to write your story. Market Research. You can’t write a story and send it off willy nilly. You may sell one or two that way, if you are extremely lucky, but for continuous success you need to know your reader.

I’d advise selecting one or two magazines that publish short stories. Those accepting them at the moment are, among others, Woman’s Weekly, Take A Break, Fiction Feast, The People’s Friend and Yours. You can find a full list of markets at www.womagwriter.blogspot.co.uk

Read through all of the stories in your chosen magazine and find something that resonates with you, those that might be similar to stories you would choose to write. Most importantly, read them with respect. Don’t sneer and pass judgement. It’s a hard market to crack and if you disrespect your reader your writing will come across as patronising. Guess what? No sale.

Get a pen and paper and make notes. What are the characters names, what ages? Where do they work?  Where are the stories set? What are they about – family, romance, comedy, thriller? Each market has its subtleties and you need to make yourself familiar with them if you are to have any hope of success.

What is the word count? Each magazine has set limits. It’s no good sending a 700 word story  to Woman’s Weekly when they only take 1,000 or 2,000 words. It will come straight back to you.

Now read the entire magazine, the articles, the readers’ letters, the adverts, the problem pages. You can learn so much about the readership by doing this and then you will be able to build a picture of your ideal reader. Do it as an exercise. Imagine a woman buying that magazine – what does she look like? What job does she have? Where does she live? Before you know it you will have a character; you may even have a story – get writing.

Editors are busy people. Make things easy for them. Present your work as per their guidelines, found on their website. If you are unsure how to set things out pop over to writer Sue Moorcroft’s website because she has the best example I’ve seen on how to present a professional manuscript. It will save you so much time and effort  www.suemoorcroft.wordpress.com/manuscript-presentation

 

I’ll be talking at Words for the Wounded Literary Festival on 16th April and will be happy to chat about writing short stories for the commercial market throughout the day.

 

Tracy Baines’ stories have appeared in Woman’s Weekly, Best, Take a Break, The People’s Friend, Candis, My Weekly, Yours in the UK – and magazines in Scandinavia, Australia and South Africa. She has completed a book on Eating Disorders and is now working on a novel.

Caroline Moran Raised By Wolves Interview

Caroline Moran InterviewHow did it feel watching series 1 go out? Where did you watch it, and who with?

I live in Sheffield, so I was at home, and my sister Claire, who is the inspiration for the character Yoko, also lives there. So I would go over to her house to watch it, she would take my phone off me so I wasn’t tempted to look a Twitter, because that’s never a good idea. I found the whole thing very, very, very surreal. Obviously I’d seen every episode a lot, because I’m on set all the way through shooting, and then in the edit. But when it goes out, it feels like opening night in the theatre. Just seeing something you’ve made on television is the pinnacle. It doesn’t get any better than that. I can die happy, right now.

Does it feel very vulnerable; having something you’ve worked on for so long, and is so personal, suddenly out there for criticism?

I kind of have all my anxiety a while before it goes out, actually, when we’re showing it to a few people and getting their opinions. Once it’s out there in the world, there’s nothing else you can do. Hopefully people will enjoy it. If they don’t, hopefully, they’ll enjoy not liking it. I let it go at that point. That’s why I try not to look at Twitter – there’s not really anything I can do at that stage anyway. Luckily, when I go to the supermarket, I’m alright, no-one knows that I wrote that thing on television that they hated last night. I’m not an actor!

Did writing series 2 feel different from doing the first series?

I really wanted to make sure the quality didn’t dip. And we wanted to get a bit more plot in there – we didn’t have a huge amount of that in the first series. And we knew we wanted to get more Della in; we knew that we wanted to get Grampy more into the family. And we knew the characters a lot better, and the actors, which helped us when we were writing. It felt a bit more pressured, because first time round we didn’t know what we were letting ourselves in for. This time, we knew the process, so we felt like we needed to get it right.

You’ve written for theatre in the past. Does writing for TV feel like a very different process?

Most of what I know about writing for TV is what I’ve learned from theatre. I guess the main thing is, in theatre you can tweak stuff. You can see the audience’s reaction, and then change things for the next night based on that. In TV, obviously you can’t do that. That’s where our executive producers are really helpful, because they’ll be that first audience for us.

When you sat down to write series 2, did you know what you wanted to do? Had you kept some stuff back from series 1?

We put everything into series 1 – we totally emptied the coffers. I think you shouldn’t hold back, you need to get it all in there, because you never know if you’re going to get another series. So every trick and joke went into the first series, and we had literally nothing for the second series. When we started brainstorming ideas, we quite quickly got to the idea of the final episode, and actually I wrote that first, I just did a draft over a weekend for that. Once we had that, we knew where we were going. Ultimately, they end up going on holiday in a caravan, which is based on holidays we went on in caravans as kids. We actually went away on location, it felt pretty epic. There were dunes to play with, and a caravan. And I think that’s my favourite episode as well. That was in Formby, north of Liverpool. They had red squirrels there! And it was so beautiful! We had such a great time. We had to evacuate though, because there was a massive storm, and it looked as though the catering bus would tip over.

How involved do you guys get on set?

Pretty involved. I think I’m probably quite irritating. I go on set – I love that bit of it. I can talk to the actors, and the director’s very good at taking suggestions. And then I’m in the edit, which is super-intense. And before that, there’s the writing period. So since May of last year, I’ve had no life – I’ve basically been doing Raised By Wolves. I’m aware that I’m quite mad

How did it feel getting everyone back together for the second series?

It just felt so right, being back with those guys. I’m actually friends with them all now, and really good friends with Rebekah Staton. She’s not Della, so at the end of every day, there’s a period of time when she winds back into being Rebekah. And Rebekah is very feminine and gentle, but has traits of Della. So you get Della plus this really cool woman as well. She’s just awesome. I’d love to write stuff for her forever.

How does the writing process work with the two of you?

We start off in a room together, and we brainstorm. We do big series-wide ideas, just chuck loads of stuff into the pot, and don’t think about structuring anything. And then we go our separate ways, and we start structuring and drafting. We don’t then write together until the very end, when we go through it and tart up lines and put in extra jokes. Or if there’s a crisis. We spend a lot of time on Skype.

Obviously Germaine and Aretha are based on the two of you, and you’ve mentioned that Yoko is based on another sister. Do any other family members think characters are based on them, and does it cause family ructions?

There are actually eight of us siblings – only six in the show; we thought eight was unmanageable, so we dropped two. So there’s been a bit of debate about who got merged with who? There are actually three boys in our family, and only one in the show – we thought it was funnier to just have one boy among all those women. So the boys gave us grief – “Are we that interchangeable that we’ve just merged into one?” We explained that it was for the purposes of comedy. We’ve spoken to various siblings about various things, and they’ve come up with ideas or music suggestions or Wolverhampton phrases, so they’ve been really supportive of it, and they watch the show whenever it goes out.

One of the great things about the show is the performances. Were you involved in the casting?

Yes, in the early days. Helen, who plays Germaine, just walked up to Caitlin at a book signing and said “If you ever make a TV show, can I be in it?” And that’s how they met. Caitlin would have done exactly the same thing. She used to write letters to Comic Relief, and Lenny Henry once replied to her, I think.

So Caitlin took her number?

Yeah, she did. Which is again incredible, because the number of times I’ve given Caitlin a bit of paper with something written on it and she’s lost it. But this one she kept, she didn’t lose it, and about a year later, when the casting started, we got her in, as well as loads of other people. But there was just something about her from the beginning. And with Aretha, obviously we had a whole load of ginger people in a room, auditioning. Although Alexa, who actually plays her, is blonde! And Molly, who plays Yoko, came in to audition for Germaine, and we just thought there was something about her, and we wanted to see her again. We hadn’t cast Della by that point, but then Rebekah Staton turned up. And Phil Jackson as well – the classiest man in television. He’s a prince.

What can you tell us about the series?

Germaine goes on an exploration to discover what it’s like to have a man in her life. Aretha finds a kindred spirit out in the world, and we realise she has a vulnerable side, actually. Yoko reaches adolescence, and becomes very worried about the environment, and extinction of animals. We explore Della’s work life and romantic life. Grampy is living in the coat cupboard, and he has a romantic liaison. Everyone’s got a bit of business